My lavender date
in the door frame.
Light of September sun
behind him,
cutting him out like a cookie.
published: Big Pulp, March 2008
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These poems are fabulous - alive, sensual, full of scent and sound and color. I can almost feel the blades of grass between my toes as you describe walking around the farm. Wow! No wonder you feel drawn to continue on this road. I'll mark your blog and look forward to more. - Peggy Natiello, Sedona, AZ
Maria, how amazing to see your poems black on white, to witness the scars from your childhood, the dreams you dream, the deep thoughts pouring forth from you. Thank you for sharing your poetry. You are courageous, keep writing... - Ulli Sir Jesse, Telluride, CO
You definitely need to continue sharing your writing. There is something primal, honest and nurturing within it .. a reminder of a fire that each of us must keep close to us, share with others and warm our souls with.
Wes Wyatt, Salem, VA
Your poetry is beautiful! I can see how you will make a fabulous Poetry Therapist! My very favorite poem is “A Slice of India” ~~ wonderful!
Carlita Riedel, Sedona, AZ
Maria, how amazing to see your poems black on white, to witness the scars from your childhood, the dreams you dream, the deep thoughts pouring forth from you. Thank you for sharing your poetry. You are courageous, keep writing... - Ulli Sir Jesse, Telluride, CO
I love your poetry blog. My absolute favorite is Once Upon a Time. You have such beautiful metaphors. Keep up the good work. What a treat!
Pam Taylor, Sedona, AZ
Pam Taylor, Sedona, AZ
You definitely need to continue sharing your writing. There is something primal, honest and nurturing within it .. a reminder of a fire that each of us must keep close to us, share with others and warm our souls with.
Wes Wyatt, Salem, VA
Your poetry is beautiful! I can see how you will make a fabulous Poetry Therapist! My very favorite poem is “A Slice of India” ~~ wonderful!
Carlita Riedel, Sedona, AZ
How marvelous, delightful, and promising. It is only a matter of time now before others, after reading one or two or three of your poems, discover their hair is on fire. Like me, they'll jump to their feet and shout "Hallelujah!" Amid a world filled with shallow plastic wading pools, there is finally an ocean, with some real water to swim in... David Sunfellow, Sedona, AZ
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Wow Maria. You really open up and share what's inside. I feel great emotion when reading your poems. Congratulations... Keep up the good work! Bob Coates, Sedona, AZ
Good visuals. Way to paint a picture. It has the succinctness of a haiku.
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